Wednesday, February 16, 2011

55 Fiction: Still blaming your life n luck?


Frustrated, abusing her boss n her ex-boyfriend, cursing her life, she was walking..
And there came a child, begging for a coin.. She gave him a ten rupee note, something much lesser than 1% of her salary...



It brought a smile on his face, and she asked herself , "Am I really unlucky?"


P.S. This is my first attempt to write a 55 fiction blog, a really short story that says a lot..

Next blog soon !!
Sonia

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28 comments:

Disha said...

Keep up the good work Sonia:)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Nice one, shows the negativity and bitterness after a fight quite aptly.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Neeha said...

Good work..
We never realize how lucky we are..
We jus keep blaming our misfortune..

The Expert said...

Wow this sure makes me feel better about my crappy life. Oh wait, not it doesn't. My life is still crappy, and so is that little foreign kid's. I feel depressed for both of us now.

Clover89 said...

Thanks for that story. Gives readers food for thought. We should all be grateful for our lot in life.
Keep up the good work
Irene xxx

Sonia said...

@ Disha Di, Neeha n Irene
Thanks !!
Yeah.. we never realize how lucky we are..

@ Blasphemous Asthete
Its not only the bitterness after a fight, its the bitterness of cribbing about things that we think we are missing n not realizing that we are way luckier than what we think !

Cheers !!
Sonia

Sonia said...

@ the expert

Well..think about it,if you do have the luxury to have your own laptop n to read n comment on blogs.. i guess, your life can never be as crappy as the foreign kid's life..

Charlie Courtois said...

Yes, Sonia,we really never know how much we are blessed. All of the worldly things are worth absolutely nothing. They are only temporary fixes!

Yesterday means nothing, tomorrow may never come for us, so all we have is today! Live it to the fullest, love your fellow man just like you, yourself, would like to be loved.

Charlie Courtois said...

PS:
I just redid my page here today. I Blog at Newsvine, under Charlie Courtois,at WordPress, at two Blogs: The Power of the Word, and All Things Employment.

Here: http://nearertotruth.blogspot.com/2011/02/star-of-bethlehem.html
Take care, Charlie

Unknown said...

superb...just superb ....

nice picture...

Jai Ho Mangalmay ho

Phewww said...

hey it was nice..n nice pic also... :)

n when u write 55 fiction, y dont u give the title '55 fiction'? thr r lot of readers who jus look for tat.. :D

hav fun.. :)

S said...

Nice post! If only all of us became a little considerate and started thinking like this, this world would have been a better place.

p.s: Love your template :) Thanks for dropping by!

Sonia said...

@ Charlie, Vivek n S
Thank you so much !!

@ Anoop
Yeah !! I've changed the title, thanks for the suggestion :-)

Esther said...

This was inspiring :)
Good luck! <3

Anonymous said...

Nicely written. The complex truth which we know but really don't agree. And you wrote it well in 55 words.
Kudos.
Keep writing. Take care. :)

Irfanuddin said...

A thought provoking post, really...
after knowing all this, we must thank our GOD, how blessed we are....

Regards,
irfan

Jennifer Black said...

Wow, I hadn't heard of 55fiction before thanks for this, I have the opposite problem with my blog, I keep going into too much detail about my life!

Sonia said...

Thanks a lot everyone :-)

S said...

Loved the message, you tried sending out! Happiness is inside, we just need to discover it :)

S said...

And yes, you are now blogrolled, hence you should write more often now! :D

Anonymous said...

nicely done :)


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i love it!!! and the pic is sooo perfect too...the angle at which it is shot is super interesting

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Sonia said...

@ Sourav

Thank you so much !!!
honored :D :D :D

@ Prutha

Yeah.. I love the pic too !! Thanks !

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