Frustrated, abusing her boss n her ex-boyfriend, cursing her life, she was walking..
And there came a child, begging for a coin.. She gave him a ten rupee note, something much lesser than 1% of her salary...
It brought a smile on his face, and she asked herself , "Am I really unlucky?"
P.S. This is my first attempt to write a 55 fiction blog, a really short story that says a lot..
Next blog soon !!
Sonia
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28 comments:
Keep up the good work Sonia:)
Nice one, shows the negativity and bitterness after a fight quite aptly.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Good work..
We never realize how lucky we are..
We jus keep blaming our misfortune..
Wow this sure makes me feel better about my crappy life. Oh wait, not it doesn't. My life is still crappy, and so is that little foreign kid's. I feel depressed for both of us now.
Thanks for that story. Gives readers food for thought. We should all be grateful for our lot in life.
Keep up the good work
Irene xxx
@ Disha Di, Neeha n Irene
Thanks !!
Yeah.. we never realize how lucky we are..
@ Blasphemous Asthete
Its not only the bitterness after a fight, its the bitterness of cribbing about things that we think we are missing n not realizing that we are way luckier than what we think !
Cheers !!
Sonia
@ the expert
Well..think about it,if you do have the luxury to have your own laptop n to read n comment on blogs.. i guess, your life can never be as crappy as the foreign kid's life..
Yes, Sonia,we really never know how much we are blessed. All of the worldly things are worth absolutely nothing. They are only temporary fixes!
Yesterday means nothing, tomorrow may never come for us, so all we have is today! Live it to the fullest, love your fellow man just like you, yourself, would like to be loved.
PS:
I just redid my page here today. I Blog at Newsvine, under Charlie Courtois,at WordPress, at two Blogs: The Power of the Word, and All Things Employment.
Here: http://nearertotruth.blogspot.com/2011/02/star-of-bethlehem.html
Take care, Charlie
superb...just superb ....
nice picture...
Jai Ho Mangalmay ho
hey it was nice..n nice pic also... :)
n when u write 55 fiction, y dont u give the title '55 fiction'? thr r lot of readers who jus look for tat.. :D
hav fun.. :)
Nice post! If only all of us became a little considerate and started thinking like this, this world would have been a better place.
p.s: Love your template :) Thanks for dropping by!
@ Charlie, Vivek n S
Thank you so much !!
@ Anoop
Yeah !! I've changed the title, thanks for the suggestion :-)
This was inspiring :)
Good luck! <3
Nicely written. The complex truth which we know but really don't agree. And you wrote it well in 55 words.
Kudos.
Keep writing. Take care. :)
A thought provoking post, really...
after knowing all this, we must thank our GOD, how blessed we are....
Regards,
irfan
Wow, I hadn't heard of 55fiction before thanks for this, I have the opposite problem with my blog, I keep going into too much detail about my life!
Thanks a lot everyone :-)
Loved the message, you tried sending out! Happiness is inside, we just need to discover it :)
And yes, you are now blogrolled, hence you should write more often now! :D
nicely done :)
Crying With A Sense Of Human
i love it!!! and the pic is sooo perfect too...the angle at which it is shot is super interesting
http://donotshoeme.blogspot.com/
@ Sourav
Thank you so much !!!
honored :D :D :D
@ Prutha
Yeah.. I love the pic too !! Thanks !
Great post. . you can really reflect for a minute after reading this one.=0
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